Wow. When I read the description for this story, I thought it'd rate 3-4 stars at best, but boy was I wrong.
The writing style is a bit basic, and that in it's own right give it its own unique charm. Madeline is a well-written but understandably inconsistent character, but for some reason, she isn't my favorite character. That place falls to a tie-up between Anya, Millicent, and Melody.
I sincerely hope to see more stories like this in the future. I'm definitely going to be following your work from here on.
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This was great, thanks for making it. I like the characters. Madeline is super likeable. What a cutie! Arin was thoughtful, sensitive, and supportive.
Wow. When I read the description for this story, I thought it'd rate 3-4 stars at best, but boy was I wrong.
The writing style is a bit basic, and that in it's own right give it its own unique charm. Madeline is a well-written but understandably inconsistent character, but for some reason, she isn't my favorite character. That place falls to a tie-up between Anya, Millicent, and Melody.
I sincerely hope to see more stories like this in the future. I'm definitely going to be following your work from here on.
Loved it! Please write more!
Thank you! Been hard at work on the sequel! Life has been and continues to be busy, but Ill have it up here at some point!